Flow of pages 1. 2 and 3

 Orignal

Revisement

I will use the same figure in the original panel two and put it back in the revised one, since it is more dynamic and moves the viewer  to focus more on the weapon, which I want.

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New comic review and fix

I really need to work on my faces more and my hunch and profile poses...

Tillman review

I thought this was awesome so I had to share, It was so sweet I have rotten teeth now, lol.

This is a a very good comic called Ichabod the Optimistic Canine by Ayla Stardragon